intro to "MWA piece"

The first piece I chose was my process paper, which was my first major writing assignment written week five of the quarter on April 30,2007.This was a compare and contrast essay titled, “The Highlights of the Islands.” I chose this piece because it showed how similarities and differences are clearly demonstrated throughout my writing. This assignment showed my improvement as a writer because I provided great detail throughout the essay. For example the sentence; Oahu coral reefs offer excellent visibility, along with beautiful coral formations, sea turtles, and other ocean life. This sentence is one of many that provide the reader with a clear picture of what I am describing.